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Look! It's Anxiety!
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05-24-2016, 11:05 PM
I enjoyed and related to the poem so thank you for the read. It felt mildly juvenile because of words like "dumb". The grammar is slightly inconsistent and awkward "unable to think, but over-think everything" feels strange to me. The use of "they" is slightly confusing. Overall, good poem.
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Look! It's Anxiety! - by Queerventions - 04-28-2016, 06:32 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by QDeathstar - 04-28-2016, 10:59 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Wjames - 04-29-2016, 05:31 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Quixilated - 04-30-2016, 12:10 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by humility - 04-30-2016, 06:18 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Queerventions - 05-07-2016, 06:03 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by psychonaut - 05-13-2016, 03:18 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Erthona - 05-13-2016, 09:50 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by ChristopherSea - 05-13-2016, 10:29 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Sarah Luu - 05-14-2016, 06:50 PM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Seanwd98 - 05-24-2016, 11:05 PM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by kolemath - 05-25-2016, 10:13 AM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by ariii - 06-07-2016, 09:43 PM
RE: Look! It's Anxiety! - by Andrias - 06-08-2016, 11:35 AM
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