05-23-2016, 10:41 AM
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The stiff part: when you leave something of a thicker material (like denim) out until it's completely dry, it's extremely stiff. Putting them on afterward is like getting your legs waxed. Thinner materials like the sheets will remain pliable.
About the axle grease: it's an odd one for sure. These smells are all from memory, and I can smell the grease that my dad used on the tractor when I close my eyes and return to this scene. So, that's the why. I can easily choose something else, since not everyone is in my head. I just thought it was a bit of a thinker -- a little dash of the unexpected.
Yeah, I guess I don't really know what I'm doing rhyme-wise. The middle bit about inhaling scent was in syllabics.
The firm bit, I'll think on. I'm not attached to that word, per se.
Thanks for your feedback!!
The stiff part: when you leave something of a thicker material (like denim) out until it's completely dry, it's extremely stiff. Putting them on afterward is like getting your legs waxed. Thinner materials like the sheets will remain pliable.
About the axle grease: it's an odd one for sure. These smells are all from memory, and I can smell the grease that my dad used on the tractor when I close my eyes and return to this scene. So, that's the why. I can easily choose something else, since not everyone is in my head. I just thought it was a bit of a thinker -- a little dash of the unexpected.
Yeah, I guess I don't really know what I'm doing rhyme-wise. The middle bit about inhaling scent was in syllabics.
The firm bit, I'll think on. I'm not attached to that word, per se.
Thanks for your feedback!!