05-22-2016, 05:17 AM
This is one of the reasons I love The Pen so much. I basically ran out of gas near the end of NaPM and haven't posted a crit or poem of substance since. I love that I don't have to force a long poem for crit, but can have a 3 line idea for a senryu and have it chewed on. What are the implications of the em dash? Is this one sentence or two? These are the blocks that build bigger poems. I post 7 words and get to see what worked, what didn't, and sometimes, why.
Thanks,
Paul
-- genie jumps from a bottle
asking 'what is your wish?'
wife looks at me and says,
'you better tell him your good'
Thanks,
Paul
-- genie jumps from a bottle
asking 'what is your wish?'
wife looks at me and says,
'you better tell him your good'