05-22-2016, 02:17 AM
Kole, "Kicking that drum skin hard", of course! Thanks so much.
Mark, I will look into how to post edited versions correctly. Thanks again.
Joseph, I think I want the flow to be broken sometimes, to have different rhythms in the poem, but it could be too much. I'll have another look at it. I like the extra tap. Thanks!
Mark, I will look into how to post edited versions correctly. Thanks again.
Joseph, I think I want the flow to be broken sometimes, to have different rhythms in the poem, but it could be too much. I'll have another look at it. I like the extra tap. Thanks!

