Lightning Truth

[Joseph Didis]

Pretty sweet poem on a subject I have been thinking about a lot lately. Or at least the way interpret it, very short: "all we have is now, when we dont conceptualize everything the world becomes a place of so much more beauty". This is from the framework I read it, and will give feedback anyway.

My self-contained destiny is expressed in every moment eternally
I bask in all pervading, pre-conceptual valley of truth    I like this beginning, nice with both yin and yang, basking and valley.

My days never end 
Seldom do I ever see the night    Again nice balance, but as said, bit of a cliche.
Except when I let the darkness of my own soul    You could think of dropping "own" here, sort of saying the same thing twice
consume my thoughts on the walk through the    
 treacherous doubt of uncertainty    Maybe change "treacherous doubt" to a metaphor here

My will is my own 

Power is hoarded
 Waiting to be expressed and impressed into the  
 Atomic structure of a construct that must of          
  Been so elusive to deny me even a momentary    
   Pleasure    Nice passage, I personally don't like the word "atomic", but that is subjective

I aim to capture all positivity 
 Into the scope of intent
  Purified by the passion
   That fuels my direction 
    To seek out experiences that are meaningful        
    To me

Any critique is appreciated. Thanks.

Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed the read