Somnambula
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(05-18-2016, 01:22 PM)Quixilated Wrote:  Good heavens, milo, I hope you aren't serious about throwing it away.  It's beautiful.  It feels whispered almost like a lullaby.  I especially like the phrases "teasing slumber from the "earthborne" and "listening for the unsound."  And then the image of the forest cutting off the moonlight and keeping watch, it's exactly what is.  And somehow reading it just FEELS sleepy.  I grew up surrounded by the sound of cicadas and the very naming of them has a sort of magic.  Again, it's lovely. Please don't kill it?  
--Quix
(poem advocate)
You are a sweetheart.
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Somnambula - by milo - 04-21-2016, 10:07 AM
RE: Somnambula - by Leanne - 04-21-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: Somnambula - by homer1950 - 04-25-2016, 08:10 AM
RE: Somnambula - by milo - 04-25-2016, 11:28 AM
RE: Somnambula - by justcloudy - 05-07-2016, 02:47 AM
RE: Somnambula - by milo - 05-17-2016, 12:47 PM
RE: Somnambula - by Queerventions - 05-07-2016, 07:01 AM
RE: Somnambula - by BecktheDog - 05-13-2016, 09:52 PM
RE: Somnambula - by Mattp - 05-17-2016, 09:41 AM
RE: Somnambula - by bedeep - 05-17-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: Somnambula - by Quixilated - 05-17-2016, 11:19 PM
RE: Somnambula - by bedeep - 05-18-2016, 12:41 AM
RE: Somnambula - by Quixilated - 05-18-2016, 01:30 AM
RE: Somnambula - by Magpie - 05-18-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: Somnambula - by milo - 05-18-2016, 12:50 PM
RE: Somnambula - by Quixilated - 05-18-2016, 01:22 PM
RE: Somnambula - by milo - 05-18-2016, 02:30 PM
RE: Somnambula - by bedeep - 05-18-2016, 07:28 PM



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