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Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4

Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4
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05-17-2016, 06:38 PM
I loved this line

The curve of his wife’s back recalled,

will return to critique it later at length. Different, nice, interesting.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4 - by RC James - 05-17-2016, 10:38 AM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) - by Achebe - 05-17-2016, 06:38 PM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) - by Achebe - 05-18-2016, 03:10 PM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision - by RC James - 05-18-2016, 09:18 PM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision - by Achebe - 06-17-2016, 04:13 AM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 2 - by RC James - 06-17-2016, 08:57 AM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 2 - by D.Russo - 06-17-2016, 12:12 PM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 2 - by RC James - 06-17-2016, 05:36 PM
RE: Vestiges (ballade) Revision 4 - by RC James - 10-07-2016, 07:05 AM



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