05-17-2016, 08:17 AM
So here is where you seem to be stuck. First, we're not all going to agree on the first part with the periods or the spaces in the words.
Next I see where you are stalled on the second strophe, you are telling us what you want to say. You need to show us. If nothing else, give an example of HOW he has had his anger and sadness change to joy...what is he doing? How is it happening? That's what makes it poetry.
It's kinda hard. But keep trying man you've got a good start there
Next I see where you are stalled on the second strophe, you are telling us what you want to say. You need to show us. If nothing else, give an example of HOW he has had his anger and sadness change to joy...what is he doing? How is it happening? That's what makes it poetry.
It's kinda hard. But keep trying man you've got a good start there