05-16-2016, 01:28 AM
I think overall the edit clears things up especially the end. I also like the original ricochet line better.
Funny how different interpretations are here, I saw this clearly as divorcing parents who forgot about their daughter, who drifted off to ??? -- her own world perhaps in a good way or not, but not part of their lives anymore. Perhaps it was a pregnancy early lost, I didn't see that...but it's what it is. Regret. And well done for all that; but I still don't get melt. Makes me think of a sandwich.
Funny how different interpretations are here, I saw this clearly as divorcing parents who forgot about their daughter, who drifted off to ??? -- her own world perhaps in a good way or not, but not part of their lives anymore. Perhaps it was a pregnancy early lost, I didn't see that...but it's what it is. Regret. And well done for all that; but I still don't get melt. Makes me think of a sandwich.