05-15-2016, 05:18 PM
As Leanne mentioned, carrying on with the central metaphor and developing it cleverly is what makes this poem a nice read.
I'm doubtful about the reliability of the narrator as a poet of the trailer park, strikes me as being slightly inauthentic. I'd have been more comfortable with it being in the third person.
I'm doubtful about the reliability of the narrator as a poet of the trailer park, strikes me as being slightly inauthentic. I'd have been more comfortable with it being in the third person.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe