05-15-2016, 05:17 AM
Thank you, Quix. I wondered if the sparse punctuation would be a problem. It felt those commas might slow things down too much and to me it seemed obvious what was meant but, point taken and thank you.
As for the wet socks I hope to leave that to the reader's wondering though my thought was the implication of weeping (unrealistic all night long and getting socks wet, I realize.
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And yes, good that the Apocalypse came to mind. That, global warming, environmental damages of all kinds -- all of that resonates here, it was just the Alberta Canada stories that sparked the flow.\
I will consider hyphenating "water-feet" too.
thanks again!
As for the wet socks I hope to leave that to the reader's wondering though my thought was the implication of weeping (unrealistic all night long and getting socks wet, I realize.
)And yes, good that the Apocalypse came to mind. That, global warming, environmental damages of all kinds -- all of that resonates here, it was just the Alberta Canada stories that sparked the flow.\
I will consider hyphenating "water-feet" too.
thanks again!