Look! It's Anxiety!

[Sarah Luu]

I feel like there is a lack of emotion in this poem, which can be amended by adding more emotive words. When I read through this poem I get a sense of anxiety but it doesn't quite register with me and I'm not sure if that's due to your lack of punctuation or the rushed style in which you wrote. I feel that if you spend some time focusing more on your inner demons when you write and take your time with your words, you will come out with a more powerful poem on anxiety. I look forward to seeing your future improvements.