05-14-2016, 12:06 PM
well taken feedback psycho.
good poetry can have angst and anything else if done well. it's that common angst of many young poets who think expressing in such ways is a good way to write poetry. the good poets make their angst work in original ways. as i said; the title can make a poem, it can lead us in a specific direction. till you learn to channel the angst
try and temper it with strong images [metaphor/simile]
great to see a poet accepting feedback in a positive way.
good poetry can have angst and anything else if done well. it's that common angst of many young poets who think expressing in such ways is a good way to write poetry. the good poets make their angst work in original ways. as i said; the title can make a poem, it can lead us in a specific direction. till you learn to channel the angst
try and temper it with strong images [metaphor/simile] great to see a poet accepting feedback in a positive way.