05-14-2016, 12:46 AM
(05-14-2016, 12:31 AM)underthewronghat Wrote:I see, that is critical to the poem. I did a quick search and found out that the V2 rocket was the product of the A4 project. Would it be too much to use: 'A V2 rocket has just called shotgun.' That may clear things up and provide a reference for the entire poem.(05-14-2016, 12:18 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:Thanks again. The V2 references are taken directly from accounts of the V2 rockets falling on London in World War II. Might need a better hook for that piece of history.(05-14-2016, 12:13 AM)underthewronghat Wrote: Thanks Chris,Yes, that's perfect!
Shall I just edit the original to add the edited version then?
See what you think.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

