Anomaly
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(05-14-2016, 12:31 AM)underthewronghat Wrote:  
(05-14-2016, 12:18 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  
(05-14-2016, 12:13 AM)underthewronghat Wrote:  Thanks Chris,

Shall I just edit the original to add the edited version then?
Yes, that's perfect!
Thanks again.  The V2 references are taken directly from accounts of the V2 rockets falling on London in World War II.  Might need a better hook for that piece of history.
I see, that is critical to the poem. I did a quick search and found out that the V2 rocket was the product of the A4 project. Would it be too much to use: 'A V2 rocket has just called shotgun.' That may clear things up and provide a reference for the entire poem.

See what you think.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
Anomaly - by underthewronghat - 05-10-2016, 12:54 PM
RE: Anomaly - by Achebe - 05-13-2016, 07:21 AM
RE: Anomaly - by underthewronghat - 05-13-2016, 11:30 PM
RE: Anomaly - by ChristopherSea - 05-13-2016, 11:57 PM
RE: Anomaly - by underthewronghat - 05-14-2016, 12:13 AM
RE: Anomaly - by ChristopherSea - 05-14-2016, 12:18 AM
RE: Anomaly - by underthewronghat - 05-14-2016, 12:31 AM
RE: Anomaly - by ChristopherSea - 05-14-2016, 12:46 AM



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