Anomaly

[ChristopherSea]

Hello under, It's best to repost your edit above the original so that folks can find it and then compare. Change your title to 'Anomaly (edit 1)' or something like it to indicate that it is a new version. I read your original several times, but I could not really grasp your theme. Nonetheless, I did enjoy your phrasing, images and wordplay. If your project V2 is fictional, you may want to change it unless you are really referring to a Venturi-based vacuum press. I'll have another go at your edit in a bit. Good Luck.   /Chris