whoa to wickedness
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who is the suppressor, demagogue and oppressor, freedom of what?

the last two lines work well though hint at cliche, they show us an image. everything else leaves us staring into space. while the poet may know what he/she means, think about the poor reader even the title is so ambiguous without context as to confound the reader instead of enlightening them
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whoa to wickedness - by psychonaut - 05-13-2016, 11:25 AM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by billy - 05-13-2016, 04:21 PM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by Leanne - 05-14-2016, 02:58 AM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by psychonaut - 05-14-2016, 09:17 AM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by billy - 05-14-2016, 12:06 PM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by Lizzie - 05-14-2016, 12:30 PM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by psychonaut - 05-15-2016, 01:11 AM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by Leanne - 05-15-2016, 06:21 AM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by billy - 05-15-2016, 08:11 AM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by QDeathstar - 05-18-2016, 12:46 PM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by psychonaut - 05-19-2016, 10:43 PM
RE: whoa to wickedness - by QDeathstar - 05-20-2016, 03:21 AM



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