05-13-2016, 11:36 AM
Thanks so much for the read and comments, Quix. Sometimes people forget how much of a help it is when people point put specifics that they like, it sometimes keeps a line off the cutting room floor.
Maybe I'll try to think of a title that at least keeps Chagall. I don't know, maybe he saw her happily floating around too, I can only see through my own eyes. Art.
You like the lines with "hold sway", I'm wondering if you think it that phrase needs replacement, I'm up in the air.
Maybe I'll try to think of a title that at least keeps Chagall. I don't know, maybe he saw her happily floating around too, I can only see through my own eyes. Art.
You like the lines with "hold sway", I'm wondering if you think it that phrase needs replacement, I'm up in the air.
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