Loathe

[addy]

At the end of the
Night
I strip my clothes of
My back For me, it read like "I strip my clothes of. My back..." which I know is wrong . So maybe say "I strip the clothes of my back"

Stand in front of the mirror
Bare body
I lift them up with my hands Lift what up? This confused me
Only if they were higher

The back of me lines run around This line confused me too
hips long, gut overlaps
jiggles between my thighs
when I walk

To think men worship
What I am viewing
I can’t come to conclusion why "I can't fathom why" is probable close to what you mean

But, for now I can only
Imagine There's an idea break between these first two and last two lines. These first two belong more with the previous stanza
I loathe everything I see
In the reflection

Maybe it’s the excitement
And arousal they
Feel

Self-centered and selfish
How they can enjoy
But, I
Cant
Enjoy or embrace what I’ve got I love these final lines of yours. Very poignant

I always like how you end your poems LB. There's always a thought and feeling behind them Keep these up!