05-11-2016, 11:01 AM
Heeey, 71, hi, thanks for stopping in. Yep, it was a chicken shit way to try to push the reader where I needed them to go, I didn't have enough confidence in the poem that it could make it all the way. I'll chuck that. Thanks for the yea on the mildly buzzed, I'm still mildly buzzed 
but it was at risk, now I'll keep it when I do the edit shuffle.
Much appreciate the read and comments.
but it was at risk, now I'll keep it when I do the edit shuffle.Much appreciate the read and comments.
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