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A key in the door
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05-11-2016, 06:45 AM
(05-10-2016, 12:13 PM)just mercedes Wrote: Period instead of comma at the end of line 3, comma at the end of line 4, 'our forest freezes' instead of 'becomes frozen' maybe. Love that final line.Thanks for the comment and the help JM, much appreciated Keith If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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A key in the door - by Keith - 05-10-2016, 09:20 AM
RE: A key in the door - by just mercedes - 05-10-2016, 12:13 PM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 05-11-2016, 06:45 AM
RE: A key in the door - by psychonaut - 05-13-2016, 03:47 AM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 05-13-2016, 08:51 AM
RE: A key in the door - by billy - 05-13-2016, 04:32 PM
RE: A key in the door - by Todd - 05-13-2016, 10:06 PM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 05-17-2016, 06:12 AM
RE: A key in the door - by Cousin Kil - 05-20-2016, 03:24 PM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 05-20-2016, 08:59 PM
RE: A key in the door - by kaleidoscope_vibes - 05-22-2016, 11:16 AM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 07-25-2016, 09:44 AM
RE: A key in the door - by bluegypsea - 08-01-2016, 04:05 AM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 08-03-2016, 03:23 AM
RE: A key in the door - by sapril - 08-05-2016, 01:52 PM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 08-10-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: A key in the door - by D.MYST - 09-02-2016, 04:32 PM
RE: A key in the door - by Keith - 09-09-2016, 09:33 PM
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