In this place

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A very profound piece LB. I loved it so much. Hope these comments help you with the edit.

Sitting alone doesn’t concern those
With materialistic things which only covers no "s" for covertheir
Insecurities and the Marc Jacob goggles "that"( fits more grammatically, not sure if adding "that" is in keeping with your intended sense) have these people
Feeling as if they acquired something

Crimes are high
Drugs and out rages acts of promiscuity
Intrigues "intrigue" many people
The little girl’s body lay on the side walk
Blood underneath her bare body
Yet that doesn’t concern those who are selling
And reacting to their enemies with A-k 47’s

Animosity is planted in everyone’s heart on the block Take this image further: "Animosity is a disease...", something that stresses the pain and violence it causes
Hatred in each one eyes
Egotistical girls who are in competition with other girls
Because they can’t feel sufficient pass "past"? (I'm just guessing) the thick hair
The smooth dark skin is out looked Not sure what this line meant to say

They "They'd" rather cake their faces with makeup
Hide in the depths of the extra extension of weaves
Babies run around with no sandals
Crying
Mothers lose their sons
Law enforcement can no longer help
In this place only pain exist "exists"
Judgment acts are made
Faith is just a five letter word now Don't even need "now", but you can keep it if you want
With no meaning
In this place known as, America

Excellent. So many lines I loved, and very thought-provoking. Really, thank you for this LB