05-11-2016, 04:12 AM
You give great crit, Todd, can't thank you enough.
The parenthetical part of the title came first but I thought it was too boring, I think you're right that I should make the poem work without references.
You've given me great ideas of what to keep and what to work on and made me think it might be worthwhile staying on my current path with this, just try to do it better.
Thanks for the encouragement and your time.
The parenthetical part of the title came first but I thought it was too boring, I think you're right that I should make the poem work without references.
You've given me great ideas of what to keep and what to work on and made me think it might be worthwhile staying on my current path with this, just try to do it better.
Thanks for the encouragement and your time.
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