Somnambula

[Queerventions]

I had a hard time finding something tangible with this poem. I feel like maybe you using the first stanza (or whatever) to set up a scene or something to give the reader somewhere to look or go. But as I read the second part I completely lost the scene and imagery you presented in the beginning. I'm not sure what the other two pieces were so perhaps that's what I'm missing. However, I don't feel the incompleteness. It just feels disjointed. Hope this helps.