05-07-2016, 02:47 AM
I agree with homer inasmuch as I love what's here, but I feel like it isn't quite finished. I get the feeling that I'm missing something no matter how many times I read it. I think this is because I haven't read the other pieces, but this is posted as a standalone poem so it should feel like one / do the work of one as well.
Just thoughts.
-jc
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Edit: Went back and read the other two poems and this one again and still feel it's incomplete. Might just be me.
Just thoughts.
-jc
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Edit: Went back and read the other two poems and this one again and still feel it's incomplete. Might just be me.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.