My 1st post - Something from the garden

[Leanne]

This poem was posted 10 days ago and has received, to date, 8 very useful and thorough critiques.  People have spent a good deal of time on it and here at The Pig Pen, a "thank you" is the least that's expected.  If the OP has no intention of workshopping in the next 24 hours, this thread will be closed and with no further comments, will sink into obscurity forevermore.  /Admin