05-02-2016, 12:54 AM
Love the wry comment of this. The meter of the first stanza is beat perfect and I would enjoy the rest if it matched metrically a bit better. Except for the final line which is perfect. 
I am confused by the title, and think it could add more to the poem's impact -- who's getting the action? Though if the title is meant as a comment about how this kind of thing drives the narrator crazy, that makes sense but could be made clearer.
Minor quibbles, all. Enjoyed the read!
I am confused by the title, and think it could add more to the poem's impact -- who's getting the action? Though if the title is meant as a comment about how this kind of thing drives the narrator crazy, that makes sense but could be made clearer.
Minor quibbles, all. Enjoyed the read!