Twice

[LunaDeLore]

I definitely feel like this has some potential to actually become a song! Write a couple more verses, find someone to put it to music (or do that on your own) and you're set!

I probably do need to add a couple verses and dust off a few things off too. I'm certainly coming back to this one; thank you for reading and commenting.

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I enjoyed reading it, probably because Bon Iver was playing...untill it got to this
" I see you cryin'
on the other side of smoked glass
thought you felt like dyin'"
it might need some improvement(s) ;even with no music

Barbito,

I'm glad you enjoyed reading, Bon Iver or not. I'll post a re-vision
sometime in the next week.

Luna