04-30-2016, 06:07 AM
The first paragraph made me think of either an illness or murderous/suicidal intent. As what else could seeds of death grow into? The second paragraph seemed like gibberish to me. Third paragraph less gibberishy I guess, people mocking someone? Well with the 'seeds of death' from the first paragraph, the fourth paragraph makes me think of someone being tempted to head out and kill everyone mocking/doing mean things to the narrator. The earworm quality wasn't that bad I guess. But the subject matter to me felt like something the generic emo kid in a By the numbers TV series would write.