04-29-2016, 01:12 AM
Achebe - I love the sounds, the echoes, rhymes and rhythms - the craft of this is marvelous. When I read 'runes' I thought ruins, which fits too with the narrative, but 'runes' is the perfect word. Nice. You have had a strong NaPo month. I have enjoyed reading your poems although I admit there are many references that went over my head.

