Look! It's Anxiety!

[QDeathstar]

This feels like a commercial for some prescription medicine, the words are there, the feelings are there, the symptoms are there, but the emotion is not. It reads too sterile. I get sense of axienty. Just a description. The line breaks also seem haphazard, and stutter-stoppish.

Best line of the poem was the one about the school bus and dr. pepper. I like the fact that it ran les anxiously along. Rest of the poem, eh, take it or leave it.

thanks for the read.