Assimilate (rewritten)
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(04-28-2016, 04:47 AM)laltieri0 Wrote:  Hi - short sharp thought here! A bit confused though.



Alteration or preservation?  Only
retrospection fastens us
to convention lest habit's beak I disagree that only retrospection fastens us to convention. A child learns habitual behaviour without knowing its basis or its history, and without having developed the ability to look back.
swallows it like mice, Does a beak swallow? Or is it the throat that swallows?
these diminutive corpses. corpses? then the previous line should read 'swallows them'
I appreciate your play with the sounds of words, and the imagery of 'habit's beak' is fresh. However, the basic premise doesn't hold water, for me.
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Assimilate (rewritten) - by laltieri0 - 04-28-2016, 04:47 AM
RE: Assimilate - by just mercedes - 04-28-2016, 06:15 AM
RE: Assimilate - by laltieri0 - 04-28-2016, 06:23 AM
RE: Assimilate - by Achebe - 04-28-2016, 11:49 PM
RE: Assimilate - by laltieri0 - 04-29-2016, 09:12 PM
RE: Assimilate - by tectak - 04-30-2016, 12:02 AM
RE: Assimilate - by laltieri0 - 05-04-2016, 08:52 PM



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