~Seeds~

~Seeds~

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04-28-2016, 06:01 AM

This may be because I'm not an experienced poet or an english major lol
This was kind of hard to follow.
Mentioning dwell more than once so close to each other felt a little like you couldn't find another synonym to follow.

Using four different words: sorry, goddess, word, and mind, were you trying to create a narrative or 4 different themes?
Maybe I'm just asking to understand the format.

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~Seeds~ - by KittyL - 04-28-2016, 03:10 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by Queerventions - 04-28-2016, 06:01 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by humility - 04-30-2016, 06:07 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by billy - 05-14-2016, 08:15 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by LunaDeLore - 05-05-2016, 11:45 PM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by homer1950 - 05-10-2016, 02:14 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by Taboosun - 05-10-2016, 11:39 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by psychonaut - 05-13-2016, 03:02 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by Lizzie - 05-14-2016, 05:48 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by Joseph Didis - 05-23-2016, 08:10 PM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by kolemath - 05-24-2016, 08:57 AM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by Slix343 - 05-31-2016, 12:02 PM

RE: ~Seeds~ - by msredd - 06-01-2016, 06:06 AM

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