04-25-2016, 08:34 AM
The World’s Heart
Some say the last unexplored frontier
is the sea.
Maybe there really is a whale
with a soulful eye
giant and vengeful over destruction
of its kind
and we would call him Moby Dick.
Perhaps each ecosystem has its heart
and we,
are the ones who break it.
We might never know,
what has never been seen,
some already gone
that which no longer beats.
Inspired by The Heart of the Sea
I really like this one, especially your ending.
Some say the last unexplored frontier
is the sea.
Maybe there really is a whale
with a soulful eye
giant and vengeful over destruction
of its kind
and we would call him Moby Dick.
Perhaps each ecosystem has its heart
and we,
are the ones who break it.
We might never know,
what has never been seen,
some already gone
that which no longer beats.
Inspired by The Heart of the Sea
(04-25-2016, 06:42 AM)Leanne Wrote: No RedemptionLeanne,
On the day he leaves, she remains:
hollow, torn by the hands of angry men.
I really like this one, especially your ending.
"Write while the heat is in you...The writer who postpones the recording of his thoughts uses an iron which has cooled to burn a hole with." --Henry David Thoreau