No Taste of Honey with several from Mike.
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(04-23-2016, 11:48 AM)Erthona Wrote:  No Taste of Honey
 
I had a honey, she tasted like spice,
oh my honey was so damn nice,
but now my honey has gone away,
I feel so depressed, I just might turn gay.
 
Chorus:
 
Without my honey, this world's gone bland,
Without my honey, it just taste like sea sand,
yeah sure it's salty, but that's as far as it goes,
there's no hint of spice, tickling my nose.
 
 
I tried cross dressing, but felt just like a fool,
some guy he used me, as though I were his tool,
now I'm feeling hurt, in more ways than one,
pleasure is fleeting, even while it is fun.
 
Chorus:
 
So now I wander up this lonely avenue,
My minds in a haze all because of you,
and though I know you won't be coming back again,
it's really not fair caused it wasn't me who sinned.
 
But still each day, I'm the one who pays the price,
I think I've seen you, maybe once or twice,
but I know, your not in this or any other town,
you've been sewed up and your six feet under ground.
 
 Chorus:
 

erthona
music and lyrics by Dale B. Tisdale ©2016
Hmmm... Not much time for me today but had to respond.  Have managed to keep 1 out of 2 bee hives alive this year, and am planning a honey harvest today ironically enough.

Of course this just made me a little sad.  
 
I think there is grammatical issue with the comma after .."but I know".  Also, the your should be you're. While I stir this fire without wearing gloves, should it be sewn up?

Just be happy you can't hear me try to sing.

Mike
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RE: No Taste of Honey - by aschueler - 04-23-2016, 06:48 PM
RE: No Taste of Honey - by Erthona - 04-24-2016, 12:53 PM
RE: No Taste of Honey - by aschueler - 04-25-2016, 06:31 PM



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