Falling Leaves

[IgorSShute]

Although I did like the overall flow of the poem and its sound, I did still cringe a bit when reading the meter and the rhyming scheme. Such is the fate of a perfectionist, not at all your fault. I presume it is your style and you should definitely not change it! I still loved it though! The one thing I would change is, I'd eliminate two "the"s, as in the fourth stanza "the hues have spoken..." and in the second "when gone from the tree".
That's the only thing I think you could change, but I think whatever the poet likes better usually is best. 

Kind regards, Igor.