@Teagan: I like a lot of the little touches here (the wooden chair painted white, the sense of her being an addiction, her knees were to his chest, and the use of loss in the final line).
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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NaPM April 22 2016 - by milo - 04-22-2016, 12:10 PM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Achebe - 04-22-2016, 06:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Keith - 04-22-2016, 07:49 PM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-22-2016, 11:36 PM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Todd - 04-23-2016, 12:53 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Todd - 04-23-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by REW - 04-23-2016, 04:33 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by bedeep - 04-23-2016, 04:41 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-23-2016, 04:53 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Todd - 04-23-2016, 05:25 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Leanne - 04-23-2016, 05:34 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Todd - 04-23-2016, 05:36 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Leanne - 04-23-2016, 05:47 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Achebe - 04-23-2016, 07:11 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Leanne - 04-23-2016, 07:25 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-23-2016, 07:43 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Todd - 04-23-2016, 08:25 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by bedeep - 04-23-2016, 08:26 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-23-2016, 08:31 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Leanne - 04-23-2016, 08:57 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Achebe - 04-23-2016, 09:32 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-23-2016, 11:21 AM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by billy - 04-23-2016, 06:36 PM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by RiverNotch - 04-23-2016, 08:09 PM
RE: NaPM April 22 2016 - by ellajam - 04-25-2016, 04:51 AM
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