Too Restless to Sleep

[shaan]

The imagery in the poem is great.
The theme is creative.

Outside the hum and buzz
close crowded clicking
of katydids
 
Under the dry
light of the forest
flowers are motionless
unmoving
like stationary pinwheels 
 
The wild trees
bare of leaves
seem like insomniacs --- 'seem like' does not sound poetic as compare to the 2 lines before this.  maybe you can replace this with something more poetic?
 
It is near dawn
I stand in the dirt
shifting from foot to foot
knowing the end
will be nothing like this