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Achebe Offline

The Fourth Stooge

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04-22-2016, 08:15 PM

shouldn't it just be 'must a demon be stoned'?
Replacing 'can be' with 'is' saves one word
But I don't get the connection between a boy being a kid and the temptation of Christ

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Growing - by RiverNotch - 04-21-2016, 10:40 PM

RE: Growing - by Achebe - 04-22-2016, 08:15 PM

RE: Growing - by RiverNotch - 04-22-2016, 09:21 PM

RE: Growing - by Achebe - 04-22-2016, 10:19 PM

RE: Growing - by RiverNotch - 04-22-2016, 11:10 PM

RE: Growing - by Lizzie - 03-10-2017, 04:22 AM

RE: Growing - by nibbed - 03-10-2017, 04:58 AM

RE: Growing - by CRNDLSM - 03-10-2017, 05:27 AM

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