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Too Restless to Sleep

Too Restless to Sleep
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04-22-2016, 05:52 AM
Hi Keith, thank you for the time spent. I will consider your note on more interesting opening line. I will really give it some thought. Thanks.

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Messages In This Thread
Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 04-21-2016, 12:42 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by bedeep - 04-21-2016, 08:44 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by just mercedes - 04-21-2016, 08:48 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by lr3ke100 - 04-21-2016, 08:53 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Achebe - 04-21-2016, 09:45 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 04-21-2016, 02:08 PM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Keith - 04-22-2016, 05:43 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 04-22-2016, 05:52 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by shaan - 04-23-2016, 02:29 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 04-23-2016, 06:13 AM



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