04-21-2016, 10:02 AM
it would improve the poem if you stuck to the unity of place. Too many things being said, and on top of that a change in location? Overwhelms the reader.
And echo Matt - you're wasting the readers time if it's not left aligned.
And echo Matt - you're wasting the readers time if it's not left aligned.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe