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04-21-2016, 09:48 AM

I'm not a bi fan of hyphenation. Hopkins got away with it, because he invented the device. It's almost as artificial as enjambment.
Perhaps one is ok. Three is pushing it.

'Everything that voices itself' is a sparkling line

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-21-2016, 09:36 AM

RE: Unsleep - by Achebe - 04-21-2016, 09:48 AM

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RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-21-2016, 11:16 AM

RE: Unsleep - by Achebe - 04-21-2016, 11:23 AM

RE: Unsleep - by just mercedes - 04-21-2016, 11:21 AM

RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-21-2016, 11:29 AM

RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-21-2016, 12:53 PM

RE: Unsleep - by Todd - 04-21-2016, 02:17 PM

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RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-22-2016, 04:22 AM

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RE: Unsleep - by Todd - 04-22-2016, 05:56 AM

RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-22-2016, 05:57 AM

RE: Unsleep - by REW - 04-23-2016, 03:14 AM

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