Unsleep
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(This is in response to Todd's Too Restless to Sleep. His is better, but it was fun to write this.)

The wild of trees
leaf-bare, insomniacal
in chill wind.
Wind gathers around me

in the not-dark not-light
other state,
peaceless and unquiet.

Shh, I tell everything
that voices itself.
Still rustles and chirrs
sound and repeat in rhythmless
chorus,

no silence
to be found. Not here,
and not afterward.

~~~

V. 2

The wild of trees
bare of leaf, insomniacal
in chill wind.
Wind gathers around me

in the undark unlight
other state,
peaceless and unquiet.

Shh, I tell everything
that voices itself.
Still rustles and chirrs
sound and repeat, rhythmless.

No silence
to be found. Not here,
not afterward.
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Messages In This Thread
Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-21-2016, 09:36 AM
RE: Unsleep - by Achebe - 04-21-2016, 09:48 AM
RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-21-2016, 11:15 AM
RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-21-2016, 11:16 AM
RE: Unsleep - by Achebe - 04-21-2016, 11:23 AM
RE: Unsleep - by just mercedes - 04-21-2016, 11:21 AM
RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-21-2016, 11:29 AM
RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-21-2016, 12:53 PM
RE: Unsleep - by Todd - 04-21-2016, 02:17 PM
RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-21-2016, 11:05 PM
RE: Unsleep - by Leanne - 04-22-2016, 04:22 AM
RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-22-2016, 05:52 AM
RE: Unsleep - by Todd - 04-22-2016, 05:56 AM
RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-22-2016, 05:57 AM
RE: Unsleep - by REW - 04-23-2016, 03:14 AM
RE: Unsleep - by bedeep - 04-23-2016, 05:44 AM



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