Touch

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04-19-2016, 02:49 PM

I would drop the all caps. Seems pretentious. Also the heavy biblical/Jesus imagery seems heavy handed. Unless it's supposed to be about God's love or something, which I don't think it is. I guess I just like love poems to be more romantic and less mystical/creepy.

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RE: Touch - by Todd - 04-08-2016, 04:58 AM

RE: Touch - by jeh - 04-08-2016, 07:56 AM

RE: Touch - by Erthona - 04-12-2016, 06:14 AM

RE: Touch - by bluerain_ - 04-12-2016, 11:26 AM

RE: Touch - by homer1950 - 04-12-2016, 04:40 PM

RE: Touch - by babymonkey - 04-13-2016, 07:58 AM

RE: Touch - by shaan - 04-14-2016, 10:39 PM

RE: Touch - by Seanharvey - 04-19-2016, 02:49 PM

RE: Touch - by laltieri0 - 04-19-2016, 07:42 PM

RE: Touch - by IgorSShute - 04-23-2016, 06:23 PM

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