04-19-2016, 07:38 AM
bedeep - what a select collection of snippets from today's gems you posted.
To add one of yours I first thought of ". . . death grinning /just around the corner / of this calm afternoon." Its a great passage.
But after several readings I came to prefer the fun of the out loud reading of the marvelous rhymes, sounds and word play of this:
We water each other down
with the hose for fun and then
water the brown ground darker
where a few rows
of a few sprouts
are just barely there.
To add one of yours I first thought of ". . . death grinning /just around the corner / of this calm afternoon." Its a great passage.
But after several readings I came to prefer the fun of the out loud reading of the marvelous rhymes, sounds and word play of this:
We water each other down
with the hose for fun and then
water the brown ground darker
where a few rows
of a few sprouts
are just barely there.