04-18-2016, 08:00 PM
The adjectives add nothing to the poem in S1 and Everywhere else.
The period in S1 should come after S2, with acma after "bit by bit"
A gush of wind is strange. Liquids gush. Gust is what you mean.
Not clear how threads can be modest.
The period in S1 should come after S2, with acma after "bit by bit"
A gush of wind is strange. Liquids gush. Gust is what you mean.
Not clear how threads can be modest.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe