Divination
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And now

I want the "now" to balance "before". I guess you could lose "and" and keep the period but sonically I before/and now. You could lose the period, the space does the job.
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Divination - by Tiger the Lion - 04-15-2016, 10:17 PM
RE: Divination - by RiverNotch - 04-17-2016, 05:22 PM
RE: Divination - by ellajam - 04-17-2016, 07:54 PM



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