One Second Later

One Second Later

Mattp

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04-14-2016, 10:59 AM

Billy, thanks for taking the time to crit man, I'll work on the punctuation is L3 and find something more compelling than "still". Thanks again.

Homer - thanks for the detailed crit. Much appreciated.

- Matt

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One Second Later - by Mattp - 04-13-2016, 11:17 AM

RE: One Second Later - by billy - 04-13-2016, 03:12 PM

RE: One Second Later - by homer1950 - 04-13-2016, 05:33 PM

RE: One Second Later - by LunaDeLore - 04-14-2016, 08:47 AM

RE: One Second Later - by Mattp - 04-14-2016, 10:59 AM

RE: One Second Later - by shaan - 04-14-2016, 11:40 PM

RE: One Second Later - by Mattp - 04-16-2016, 07:31 AM

RE: One Second Later - by REW - 04-21-2016, 08:52 AM

RE: One Second Later - by Mattp - 04-23-2016, 09:07 AM

RE: One Second Later - by Achebe - 04-23-2016, 02:20 PM

RE: One Second Later - by Mattp - 04-23-2016, 02:32 PM

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