Little Brown Women
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I think your choice of title and refrain is unfortunate. It manages to be both sexist and racist, to my ears. No other crit.
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Little Brown Women - by Erthona - 04-10-2016, 10:59 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by Achebe - 04-10-2016, 11:35 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by just mercedes - 04-10-2016, 12:23 PM
RE: Little Brown Women - by billy - 04-10-2016, 04:04 PM
RE: Little Brown Women - by aschueler - 04-11-2016, 12:30 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by just mercedes - 04-11-2016, 04:28 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by Erthona - 04-11-2016, 04:37 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by shemthepenman - 04-11-2016, 05:48 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by ellajam - 04-11-2016, 06:45 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by aschueler - 04-11-2016, 09:43 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by billy - 04-11-2016, 09:59 AM
RE: Little Brown Women - by Erthona - 04-11-2016, 01:48 PM
RE: Little Brown Women - by tectak - 04-12-2016, 07:14 AM



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