Little Brown Women

Little Brown Women

Achebe Offline

The Fourth Stooge

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04-10-2016, 11:35 AM

Beautiful. The refrain is a delight.
The last stanza had me thinking of hunting (eyes shining in the torchlight), and the preyed upon illegal Mexican immigrants connection.
No crit to offer.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Little Brown Women - by Erthona - 04-10-2016, 10:59 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by Achebe - 04-10-2016, 11:35 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by just mercedes - 04-10-2016, 12:23 PM

RE: Little Brown Women - by billy - 04-10-2016, 04:04 PM

RE: Little Brown Women - by aschueler - 04-11-2016, 12:30 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by just mercedes - 04-11-2016, 04:28 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by Erthona - 04-11-2016, 04:37 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by shemthepenman - 04-11-2016, 05:48 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by ellajam - 04-11-2016, 06:45 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by aschueler - 04-11-2016, 09:43 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by billy - 04-11-2016, 09:59 AM

RE: Little Brown Women - by Erthona - 04-11-2016, 01:48 PM

RE: Little Brown Women - by tectak - 04-12-2016, 07:14 AM

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