04-07-2016, 01:28 PM
(04-07-2016, 01:08 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:ha, seems I don't even get my own allusions.(04-07-2016, 02:36 AM)ellajam Wrote: A poem is not a baited hookA poem is not a baited hook,
__but a fish circling,
____nibbling the swaying weeds
______and shimmering its way upstream.
but The Baite
Lovely except for my stubbed my toe on
"If thou, to be so seen, be’st loth,
By sun or moon, thou darken’st both,"
Though I can see how one might get used to it.
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