A poem
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(04-07-2016, 01:08 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  
(04-07-2016, 02:36 AM)ellajam Wrote:  A poem is not a baited hook
__but a fish circling,
____nibbling the swaying weeds
______and shimmering its way upstream.
A poem is not a baited hook,
but The Baite
ha, seems I don't even get my own allusions. Hysterical

Lovely except for my stubbed my toe on
"If thou, to be so seen, be’st loth,
By sun or moon, thou darken’st both,"
Though I can see how one might get used to it. Big Grin
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A poem - by heslopian - 04-07-2016, 01:54 AM
RE: A poem - by ellajam - 04-07-2016, 02:36 AM
RE: A poem - by RiverNotch - 04-07-2016, 01:08 PM
RE: A poem - by ellajam - 04-07-2016, 01:28 PM
RE: A poem - by Weeded - 04-07-2016, 03:03 AM
RE: A poem - by heslopian - 04-07-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: A poem - by ellajam - 04-07-2016, 03:48 AM



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